I recently taught my 7 year old nephew how to write his very first poem. Haiku is always a great place to start.

We talked about traditional haiku, how they tend to focus on nature, and he started coming up with ideas right away. We brainstormed about tigers, and then (one of my favorite topics to write about) clouds. I encouraged him to think of a feeling a cloud may have given him–silly or serious! In the end, he came up with this sweet poem:

Teaching children about poetry is one of my favorite things to do. Now that Luke knows how to write a haiku, I can only hope he’ll want to share more of his lovely ideas. That’s what inspires me.

I would love to hear what has been inspiring you lately. Please share below!

Mariana Dominé

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6 responses to “Humble Beginnings”

  1. Mica Avatar
    Mica

    Love this! Beautiful story, and beautiful poem. 💗

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  2. Sean T Avatar
    Sean T

    Had the pleasure of sitting next to Luke and Mariana as she helped him with the poem. ❤️

    Great job Luke!

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  3. mkelleymoore Avatar

    I love Luke’s poem and the story of how you worked with him. I can picture that huge blue Florida sky with one little cloud. Thank you Luke and Mariana!
    Mary Jo

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  4. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    I’ve been trying to write more with my 7 year old grandson. You have inspired me to try haiku with him. He’s quite the artist, too, so what better to do but haiku and art? Thanks for sharing Luke’s poem. I love the line “Silly Cloud!”

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  5. mbhmaine Avatar

    This story was such a lovely way to dip into Saturday morning and Poetry Friday posts. I’m so glad you shared the story and your nephew’s sweet poem today.

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  6. Irene Latham Avatar

    Mariana, I LOVE LUKE’S POEM. Please tell him it’s not just his poet-aunt who thinks he’s a poet…xo

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